Thursday, March 29, 2012

TKAM Race Essay - 9th Grade


Things I will be looking for in your essay:

1.     A thesis that is clear and that answers the prompt. (Do not just assume this is the case! Find your sentence(s) that you think is/are the thesis and really read it and see if it makes sense and if the rest of your paper is “in tune” with it.

2.     Each paragraph has a purpose and that purpose relates to your thesis. (Why are you writing each paragraph? Why did you organize it the way that you did?)

3.     It does not argue or explain the most obvious things. (We all know that discrimination, for any reason, is “bad.” Now, what insights can you give about our world today and the world in the 30’s? Is it a mature and compelling discussion?)

4.     Good transitions, word choice, and sentence construction.

5.     Grammar!! (Spelling, punctuation, etc.)

6.     MLA Format and quotes from the articles and from To Kill a Mockingbird. (Do the quotes flow well? Do they help support your main idea/thesis?)

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